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Windhover
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0 posted 2009-04-07 02:56 PM




If I were a better poet; perhaps, a masterpiece, I'd write.
A lucid observation of some heady subject of our times.
The couplets structured perfectly; a deep, and meaningful insight,
but, would they hold the gentle truths I weave into my tenuous rhymes?

The answer, probably is, No... it's all down to the reason, why
I write at all. I've no ambition to seek Literary fame.
I try to touch your thoughts with mine; to share a soft, romantic sigh,
not coldly, wade through Dictionaries seeking critical acclaim.

I try to paint a picture with those words I use;
a subtle hint
of colour, in this grey, old world... and Watercolour is my choice.
Others lean towards Acrylics... Gouache, Oils; a sharper tint.
Perhaps, they choose more wisely...
but,
I much prefer a gentler voice.

For, in my poems, you will find a single thread that binds them all
together...
this Romantic's dream; a spark, to light those darker days.
A soft caress for broken hearts... a small flame for those, yet to fall
in love... as they most surely will.
A light, perhaps... to guide the way.

These poems that I write may just be whimsy, with no merit, deep.
It really doesn't matter if they flourish... or, they fade and cease.
Yet, if...
but, one small couplet slips into your dreaming whilst you sleep;
or, brings a gentle smile...
perhaps, it was indeed, a masterpiece.

And, that is all I seek to do; to touch a heart... caress a thought;
I have no use for Copyright; for Royalties... some Princely sum.
So, if some verse or couplet touches you the way I hoped it might...
please take it...
Intellectual rights on Love belong to everyone.



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1 posted 2009-04-07 03:06 PM


your poetry always brings a sigh and a smile

I like the romantic stuff better than the smarty pants stuff any day of the week!

soul drifter
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2 posted 2009-04-07 03:35 PM


Wonderful write! The ending was especially great, with the title at the end. Loved it!
It brings it back to me that love, emotion and soul is what I truly love about poems and songs, about art all together. Everything else is just showing off, to me. This heartspeak will stay with me, which is really the point, isn't it?

"Alone: that ain't the word, it's just a groan in the morning nobody ever heard" --Justin Currie, 'Gold Dust'

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2009-04-07 04:30 PM


Bravo! tis a masterpiece indeed,
now, for the art gallery collection,
I will be waiting to view more....

~ARH

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2009-04-07 05:02 PM


VERY fine!

I am particularly fond of the ending:

"if...
but, one small couplet slips into your  
dreaming whilst you sleep;
or, brings a gentle smile...
perhaps, it was indeed, a masterpiece.

And, that is all I seek to do; to touch a  
heart... caress a thought..."

MUCH applause for this 'penning!'  

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