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shirtless
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0 posted 2008-12-27 07:24 PM



the knotted self
surrenders
to the eye
that sees
christmas
in a crippled leg
and death camps
in a smile

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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
1 posted 2008-12-27 07:35 PM


This is EXTREMELY good (and effectively succinct)!

most serious applause!!

Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
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England
2 posted 2008-12-27 07:41 PM


It's very precise and to the point
Excellently written...

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-12-27 07:50 PM


Anthony... your poetry is captivating always

love and RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

threadbear
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Indy
4 posted 2008-12-27 08:01 PM


I think I am one of those whose is torn and twisted by those who fate has touched with an iron claw.
I like this, and Merry Christmas, by the way!
Jeff

amusemi
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A State of Disarray
5 posted 2008-12-27 09:20 PM


Well done!!
Oklahoma Rose
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6 posted 2008-12-27 10:41 PM


Very good!
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2008-12-28 12:00 PM


shirtless - short write but very meaningful...

BC

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2008-12-28 08:59 AM


Always touched by your words~~

M

Marchmadness
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9 posted 2008-12-30 12:17 PM


Your poetry always touches me with it's unique style and deep thought.
                                 Ida
        

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