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Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-04-02 02:32 PM

My mind goes a hundred miles per hour
In a body that forever remains stationary
Feels like a breath inhaled, waiting
The tension mounting with every pulse
Of electric signals that course within
To try to explain this would be impossible
A dream inside of a thought in my head
Not so much visions, as feelings felt
In terms visceral and concrete
Both converging into ideas and words
That need to escape to feed or die
Before withering on the vine
Tossed upon the heap of forget
To be burned to smoldering ash
Dead, persistent babbling shouts
Need to find the voice to let them out
Completely in, completely out of sight
Bite my lip and wish it away now
Scratch the itch that glows a dull red
Inside my head a hundred miles per hour

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

1 posted 2009-04-02 02:37 PM

I have an over active mind , so I can relate so much to this

Hope

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2009-04-02 03:02 PM

The flow of this matches the content!
Whenever I have a mind-racing episode I close my eyes and meditate for a moment, breathe in the moment...and hope it quiets my thoughts.

Thank you, for reading and commenting on my posts. NFL, eh? Have you reached the 'ripe' stage of being the official Armchair Quarterback now?

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

3 posted 2009-04-02 04:01 PM

Thanks.
What are you talkin' about? I am the official coach.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2009-04-03 12:09 PM

"Dead, persistent babbling shouts
Need to find the voice to let them out"

~ At least your poetic pen can do the speaking for you!

btw, I do what Kacy does!

Calm, cool, and collected (on a good day! lol)
Linda

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2009-04-03 12:28 PM

To try to explain this would be impossible
A dream inside of a thought in my head
Not so much visions, as feelings felt

You've achieved the impossible, then. *S* I lost my breath in the read!! Most excellent!

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

6 posted 2009-04-03 04:06 PM

I was going to write a,, ,
     Darn it,  gone,
Ok,  What I was going to say before I forgot was that your,  um
     wHEW,  GONE AGAIN,
I hate it when that happens,

I relate to this too much
Tracey.

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