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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2009-01-08 09:45 AM

they were moments lined up at the curb
like limousines waiting to harvest magical
and carry some nearly forgotten day dreams
into something long sleeved with easy buttons

did it fit you funny like it did me
the uncharacteristic wondering about next
and other names for minutes ahead of us
as we traveled the slow lane more quickly

and then a stop light that we had brought along
rolled onto the dashboard of maybe today
just to give us time to read some name tags
on the proper places of things we wanted to

did you hate the waking up at night's middle
and looking around for missing directions
when there were no signs allowed beyond
the points we had already passed on purpose

when they were but moments lined up curbless
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daark

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2009-01-08 10:31 AM

quote:
they were moments lined up at the curb
like limousines waiting to harvest magical
and carry some nearly forgotten day dreams
into something long sleeved with easy buttons

And, sometimes, you leave me speechless.

Ali-san

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2009-01-08 12:29 PM

ms ali-san..you speechless? (hehe) thanks babe

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2009-01-08 01:54 PM

there were no signs allowed beyond
the points we had already passed on purpose

I sure can remember being there! Great write Dark.

Carpe' Diem,
Mysteria

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2009-01-08 02:13 PM

thanks ms myst...you bless me with your eyes

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2009-01-08 07:29 PM

your writing always captures me Mr Daark... love this gifting.

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2009-01-09 06:22 AM

thank you ms r&b

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2009-01-11 05:54 AM

quote:
did you hate the waking up at night's middle
and looking around for missing directions
when there were no signs allowed beyond
the points we had already passed on purpose

when they were but moments lined up curbless

Ah, I so love your poetic mind, dear D.! You take us always on new paths and visions, where we are free to set our own pace and emotions.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2009-01-11 07:05 AM

ms mar...thank you lady friend

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