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Chalmette Guy
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0 posted 2009-04-01 12:46 PM


Blood dripping from the wrathful moon
The end, it comes and always too soon
Screaming oblivion in rapture bliss
All you ever wanted, no more than this
Touching empty spaces thought were filled
Yet alive but with voices stilled
One resounding noise dedicated feel
Another frozen moment you steal
Tell the walls the Christ you paralyze
Not that the violet is lost from your eyes
It’s the sanctimony that pulls you through
Not the resolve of bleeding blue
Like a one time thing that forever repeats
Becoming nothing as only you it cheats
Burning candles and slipping away innocence
Disappointment with gold and frankincense
You don’t save yourself and wash it all away
Difficult decision to a new guise portray
Anarchy wakes you from your slumber
Not just a spirit but another number
In the end, it’s not about the hidden pearl
Hiding from not just yourself, but the world


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SeraphimBroken
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1 posted 2009-04-01 07:25 PM


This is very powerful... words you can feel. A wonderful read!
Chalmette Guy
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2 posted 2009-04-02 08:53 AM


Thank you very much!
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3 posted 2009-04-02 08:57 AM


The end, it comes and always too soon

That it does. *S*

I like this very much, especially the ending... wise words!!

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