I dont even know what to even call this, i just wrote what came out.

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Open Poetry #44

I dont even know what to even call this, i just wrote what came out.

PrestonThePoet
Member

since 2007-11-07

Posts 87

0 posted 2009-03-19 11:17 PM

Rain drops, and broken hearts.
Feeling the guilt
Gravity tearing my cheeks,
Pulling tears down my face.
Ruining this disguise;
Ripening my sorrow.
Lifeless hands tremble,
Curling to a fist.
Clasp the casket.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2009-03-20 06:35 AM

Preston, that is some mighty powerful poetry that just "came out" of you! Succinct but ever so compelling!!!
Wow!

Excellent!

Now please put those gripping images out of your mind and go to bed and dream sweetly and peacefully!

Linda

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

2 posted 2009-03-20 08:30 AM

This is the coolest title ever. lol

Seriously though, the power of the poem is only enhanced by the brevity.

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