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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA 
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 Do I tell him? Do I let him know? After last night It has to show, What is this feeling? I'm so confused, I don't want to get hurt, am I just getting used? When he touches me, My heart seems to melt, Am I just being foolish? Can he know how it felt? Do I look out the window? To watch him leave, Will he be looking back? [This message has been edited by WTBAKELAR (03-16-2009 03:54 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I've asked myself those same questions good write |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
love it!  Steve Hanks has great pictures, doesn't he?  |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Passing, Hope you drop back to see the Steve Hanks picture that inspired the poem. Thanks for your kind comments, WT. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Suzy, Thanks for introducing me to his work, I do so enjoy the challenge. Nice to see you, seeing me. WT. |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
I guess many people will relate to this - of both genders. Nicely written. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful presentation... the painting and poem are a perfect match! *S* I think many of us are well acquainted with such contemplations. *S* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
To give this girl a voice was quite a challenge I guess, you show a great sensitivity through your words. I believe almost every woman can relate to such a contemplation. And men should learn to understand! Good job. Love, Margherita |
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