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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2009-03-14 06:58 PM


Win-Dow

The wind bares outside misting rain -
Among minds inside listless reign.
Rushing waves billowing currents -
Rustling grave mourning susurrant.
Blue green waters tranquil soft scene -
Blues off white nightmare quiver scream.
Healthy athletic sunshine tan -
Empathy corpulent artisan.

Teeter - Totter
Win - Dow

Window of looking in, at life's pleasures.
Window of looking out, at life's treasures.

Teeter weather - Totter feather
Teeter chill weather - Totter quill feather

Equilibrium of life's window
How delicate of a picture pain.

David Lester Young 03/12/09 © all rights owned by author
De-Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time

[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (03-16-2009 09:30 AM).]

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2009-03-16 09:18 AM


The tone of this write expressed the teetering weather of spring very well.

The ryhme seemed too controling for the interpection of the write.  

You have a wonderful thought progressing here, and somehow it patters the mind long after the read.  Enjoyed your muse.

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