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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. High on a slope Of Cold Mountain From a ledge No one else can reach Solomon in his solitude Beyond reason or wisdom Lazarus after sleep Cynical Diogenes Without his lantern Grim looks And narrowed eyes And then suddenly Without any warning A southern wind Brings a scent of flowers From across the sea . |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh yeah what a way to realize the preciousness of it all. That is a wake up with a soft wind slap. Superb! Eric |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
(: -Juju |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It could be a gift. Enjoyed this "Chance". Margherita |
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pontyjim Junior Member
since 2009-03-06
Posts 40Ontario, Canada |
Really cool. Esp. "Lazarus after sleep" Nice flow. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
What a gift for the wind to blow your way. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very interesting 'write'! grand ending: "...suddenly Without any warning A southern wind Brings a scent of flowers From across the sea" applause!! |
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