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Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

0 posted 2009-01-04 08:26 PM

She Waits

How long must she wait?
When will her desires be met?
When will it all be over?
The bitter sting of regret,

All she wanted; was love,
Someone to hold her for life,
The soul-mate that she longed for,
The one to make her his wife,

And as she sits and waits;
For the love she so desires,
Her head rest in slumber,
Her eyes grow heavy and tired,

Tomorrow is a brand new dawning,
Where she will wait another day,
One day her soul-mate will find her,
And take her far away,

She sits and waits for her love,
The one she most desires,
And soon he will be with her,
Before her eyes grow tired,

Her body heaves a sigh now,
And her breathing is shallow and slow,
"Her love" is right beside her,
Saying "come we have to go"

And as he takes her hand in his,
She feels lighter than air,
She hasn't even noticed,
She has left her body there.

Annie.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2009-01-04 08:43 PM

love your poetry Annie.. love it!!

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

The Shadow in Blue
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

2 posted 2009-01-04 08:43 PM

Wow. I liked it. The first and last stanzas were beautifully written. I especially enjoyed the "bitter sting of regret" line.

Welcome to Piptalk Anniepimm.

~Jill

YoungatHeart2
Member

since 2008-12-12

Posts 81

3 posted 2009-01-04 09:25 PM

I love reading your poetry, too.....
How do you write so many so quickly and so well?

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2009-01-04 10:48 PM

a lovely write of an amazing 'out of body' experience...enjoyed muchly

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

5 posted 2009-01-05 07:10 AM

Thank you every one
YoungatHeart2! i have built up over the years of writing a vast collection of poems,
and i am constantly writing things down and then rearranging the words in to a poem,
So it is an ongoing thing all the time..

Annie

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