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Open Poetry #44

Deep-Time Connections

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2009-03-04 05:34 PM

Deep-Time Connections

An elegant moon dances
with broken clouds
over this gentle forest
of creeping shadows
and dusky winter snows,
that mask a far deeper
   reality …
the universal oneness
in every lovely Spring’s
recurrent and emergent
  diversity.

     --- b. e. adams  (3/4/2009)

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2009-03-04 05:53 PM

A fine write, Bruce. I am (im)patiently waiting for that emergent spring.

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2009-03-04 07:04 PM

Prof Bruce

I really like the title and the tie in. I could easily visualize the moon dancing with the clouds over the forest and the night snow....I've seen that scene in real life and you just brought it back.....But hurry up and deliver that spring will ya!

Excellent concise work.

Eric

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2009-03-04 07:05 PM

Nice...James

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2009-03-04 07:13 PM

secondhanddreampoet - enjoyed this very much. Spring is just around the corner, really tired of the snows...

BC

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