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Thoughts of How She Observed [Konrad’s reminisce]
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Thoughts of How She Observed [Konrad’s reminisce] |
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Sunshine
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Thoughts of How She Observed [Konrad’s reminisce]  She would say to herself, [I can hear her now!] give me the genus, doesn’t matter how, by color or name, its paper bract ~ tell me how this creature reacts! Tell of these regions, how they crawl; give me your mind…give me all; God, please, this silent creeping of her so warm in my mind, and her charm! for she was that of a close twining arm… God! I’m so glad she is not mine! But how full she was, (this is accepting) as I could only watch from shadows drear, feeling her smile, knowing her near to hear questions that she asked and queried as mindful thoughts processed clear, pure…wary… And her questions? Incessant! But yet, not cloying, Just clinging to life’s blood She so dark, deep purple sensations, Truly annoying! Yet…there she was, in lifting to light as if an “answer me now” would have a response! And I damned myself (a sound of goose hawnk!) Then, and apparent, she would repose into herself because, as only she knows, the fact of it is, her slight fear of being overheard as she questioned the skies when in flew a bird  she reached long to be caught upon its wing upon its flight once hesitant, but yet, a right to ask, be answered, she, who would know…. It carries a gift Yes, it is so. I will keep these, my thoughts of her. She saw. And still, she sees. . 1/7/04 krj |
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Martie
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Sissie....so deeply touching an observation and inspiration |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
both enchanting and deep in spirituatlity a lovely blend woven |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Thank you, Karilea for sharing this with me. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"And still, she sees." ~ as do you!  Karilea, may this coming year be one of your best ever! Love and a warm hug, Linda  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Lovely Karilea just lovely, all the very best for the coming year. Love Lindsay |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
So beautiful, Karilea. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
fine writing...James |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
God's most perfect church, but the garden He gave us. How lovely and light, these words and thoughtful revelation of the admiring eye. I sense a blessing, as in the person that touched your heart here...and I thank you for sharing that insight and honor with us. Happy New Year Gal. Loved this one.  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
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Dear Karilea, the flow of this piece was absolutely perfect. Really enjoyed this! Happy Gnu Year! |
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Alison 
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Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Karilea, You have shared beauty and that is a gift. Thank you. Alison |
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Burk28 Member
since 2009-01-08
Posts 80Michigan USA |
Outstanding verse and passion for the craft of writing here, excellent Peace of mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful wordsmithing. I don't think I know the whole story but the results are well penned here. Good to read your work again Karilea Eric |
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