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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2009-03-01 02:47 PM


I want new curtains heavy, thick
to shroud the mind from love’s desire  
and I want to sleep dead, deader still,
till long past my awakening.

I want the sleep of ignorance,
the sleep of one deemed spiritless,
two brown eyes instead of blue,
the body of a younger me,
the heart of one who never loved,
and a soul that knows its place.  

I want and yet of wants they are
purely home-grown fantasies
that never bud or bloom
but in this time of knowing more
I still dig and plant the seeds
and look most every day
for a hint of change.

But nothing comes and nothing goes
when wants aren’t needed by the soul!

Helen / 1 March 2009


© Copyright 2009 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-03-01 03:06 PM


What an impressive write, dear Helen!!

I must just stay a while and absorb your thoughts here.

As long as there is desire, there will also be suffering, but I know it is not easy to be without desire, so we continue to suffer.

Thicker curtains won't do.  And of course a beautiful soul like yours must really feel awkward when her owner expresses the wish to be spiritless. Instead, I suppose, your soul wants to be embraced and told that you are living and loving and learning just what you have come to live, love and learn.

Sleep is all right, but not the sleep of ignorance, sleep of recharging the batteries, sleep of connection with ... soul.

Go on planting your seeds and all is well.

I send you all my love, beautiful Poetess.
Margherita

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2009-03-01 03:39 PM


Thank you, dear Margherita.   I know, I know, but sometimes, sometimes, I really do want to be "ignorant".  No going back, of course.  Sigh!  I needed to read your comment - thank you.

Much love
Helen

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2009-03-01 03:46 PM


Honey, I could not express my own thoughts better than Margherita wrote in her reply ~

Quoting Margherita

"I must just stay a while and absorb your thoughts here.

As long as there is desire, there will also be suffering, but I know it is not easy to be without desire, so we continue to suffer.

Thicker curtains won't do.  And of course a beautiful soul like yours must really feel awkward when her owner expresses the wish to be spiritless. Instead, I suppose, your soul wants to be embraced and told that you are living and loving and learning just what you have come to live, love and learn.

Sleep is all right, but not the sleep of ignorance, sleep of recharging the batteries, sleep of connection with ... soul.

Go on planting your seeds and all is well.

I send you all my love, beautiful Poetess."

~  Honey, I also understand that at times, ignorance can be bliss.


Linda


Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
4 posted 2009-03-01 04:08 PM


Yo dear Honeybunch,

Blue eyes work just as well as brown eyes.  Mine are hazel, they work good too.

Love Bobby

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
5 posted 2009-03-01 04:28 PM


Indeed...Yes indeed , all of this what you write echoes a heart that knows love all too well
LindsayP
Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
6 posted 2009-03-01 10:10 PM



my sincere sympathy to you dear Helen, My

thoughts and prayers are with you my dear.
Love and a big hug.

Lindsay

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
7 posted 2009-03-01 10:20 PM


There's always something behind a curtain.
There's always sunshine after rain.
There's always choices after change.
There's always friendship after sadness.
There's always heartbeat before death.
There's always reason after rhyme.

And, there's always you worth your best!

Eric

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