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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2009-02-22 03:43 PM



Beyond Sunday Thoughts


Beyond the line, I worry about you
even if truth is often held back.

There is strength in smaller fragments
and wisdom in the holding onto.
A because, with no explanations needed.

Behind hazel eyes are the thoughts
that dream forevers, that discard the negatives
and spirit today with understanding.

Reaching out to time...
for that is all we have.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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ethome
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1 posted 2009-02-22 03:53 PM


You certainly are very understanding Maureen.

Love the positive expression of that third verse. Even with a few holes in it some is always better than none.

Eric

Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2009-02-23 04:30 PM


A sincere wisdom in this and the really liked seeing the belief in the positives shine in this one.  You showcase your insight well in the "smaller fragments" and the "holding onto wisdom".  Very much enjoyed this side of you.
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2009-02-23 06:31 PM


ethome, not  so much understanding as accepting the situation as is. Once you reach a certain age, there are more important things to think about and enjoy in life than the material. There will always be those holes ( I just try not to fall into them anymore)
Thanks E

M

Mark, well I am just a small fragment of this world, so I try to hold onto as much wisdom as I have learned and that offered me when needed.

Thanks Mark, great to see you here again.

M  
  

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2009-02-23 06:49 PM


I love your beyond Sunday thoughts, dear Maureen.

They hold the sweet awareness of maturity, when the essential is recognized.

Beautiful!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

steavenr
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5 posted 2009-02-23 11:09 PM


"Reaching out to time...
for that is all we have"

ahhhh...the currency of our lives...amazing how it affects everything in the ways we spend it...excellent write...

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2009-02-24 03:35 PM


Maureen - enjoyed the thoughts in this write. Hope you're well...

BC

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2009-02-27 06:32 AM


Thanks again all.

Wow Steven "ahhhh...the currency of our lives...amazing how it affects everything in the ways we spend it..." a wonderful response..
Could almost be inspired to write a poem called "The Currency of our Lives"



M

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