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Lapel Pins Lapis Homily
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Lapel Pins Lapis Homily |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Lapel Pins Lapis Homily Sunday billowed forth in color and fiddle-bow Plump, the morning rose in palette purple clouds To be circumspect, by low lying scent of melting night Did I stand in utterance of the ghostly handed mist? Welcoming the best dressed entrance of day Not a shadow or chill could covet heaven’s gleam Trees in motion with morning song and feathered beat Hungry from winter, announcements replete Thumbs of sanctity, lift dimensional view Fine, the striking fit of the sun shines through, Embossed upon the sky above Did I stand, an observer or patron to this timeless fervor? Copyright Kkh 2/22/09 |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Grand imagery here! ... I am particularly fond of the line: "Trees in motion with morning song and feathered beat(!)" applause! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This ... ----------------------------------------------- Not a shadow or chill could covet heaven’s gleam Trees in motion with morning song and feathered beat ----------------------------------------------- pure poetry and then the earnest question at the end ... wrapped it up perfectly. |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
just gorgeous . Boshii2 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I simply like it all  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD...From the title to the final question, great poetry! |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I love this! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I must confess...I read your work sometimes just to glean from your imagery...you do such a lovely job of putting its majesty to the page...really, really liked your last line on this one...fabulous |
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