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Windhover
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0 posted 2009-02-22 09:42 AM





When the last Morning star softly fades in the dawning
of the pale, misty light of the last summer morning;
When the last blossom smiles in the last sun-ray, beaming,
and the last story ends; with all hopes, and all dreaming;
As the last swallow climbs on the last winds a'breathing,
and the last butterfly lifts her wings, for the leaving...

I shall love you, still.


When the last Dragonfly spreads her wings in the warm glow,
for to dart her last flight in the last flowering meadow;
As the last leaves burn gold in the deep forest greening,
and the last Bumblebee dreams her last, honeyed dreaming;
As the last Swan glides down to the last river's wending,
and the last crystal spring softly flows to its ending...

I shall love you, still.


When the last Rainbow smiles through the last gentle shower,
and the last petal falls from the last fading flower;
As the last Skylark lifts, in her last spiral weeping,
And the last cloudling melts in the last azure deeping;
When the last birdsong rings in the last woodland glading,
and the last Eagle soars; her last, sad cry soft fading...

I shall love you, still.


When the last Mountain range crumbles down, swiftly breaching,
and whatever might be, is now far from the reaching;
When the last Ocean breaks the last wave, softly foaming,
and the last Sea-birds cry on the last breeze a'roaming;
As the last sands of time softly run to their dooming,
with the last precious hours of the last day swift looming...

l shall love you, still.


When the last Sun is goldening, with the last dusk a'creeping,
and the last Evening star shimmers to her last sleeping;
As the last pale moon drifts to her last wane-some flowering,
and the last twilight glim of the last day is lowering;
As the last stars grow dark, with the last night a'deeping,
and all that was once, is no more for the keeping...

I shall love you, still.




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passing shadows
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1 posted 2009-02-22 11:00 AM


I must admit that I was a little intimidated by the title because I don't know any foreign language but this is a masterpiece that I'm glad I ventured into!

passing shadows
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2 posted 2009-02-23 11:02 AM




I can't believe no one commented on this! This is simply gorgeous!

Maybe the title makes people think that the poem is not in English?

I dunno.

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3 posted 2009-02-23 01:04 PM


A beautifully written piece celebrating never ending love.  
Margherita
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4 posted 2009-02-23 01:50 PM


Very beautifully rendered eternal love, that transcends matter and blooms across forever.
Every stanza could stand on its own, but harmony unfolds along the whole poem.

I really enjoyed it greatly.

Love,
Margherita

Boshii2
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5 posted 2009-02-23 02:15 PM


yes beautiful
   so beautiful
      so very beautiful
                        Boshii2

Marchmadness
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6 posted 2009-02-24 12:34 PM


Excellent!, Windhover.
                  Ida

Marc-Andre
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7 posted 2009-02-24 01:01 PM


This poem is truly impressive! It's beautifully touching, and this is one of the few I know I will come back to and read again. As for the title, I expected a French poem. Also, I'm not too sure the title is appropriate either, I speak French and the title brought no expectation that were remotely close to what I found here. I'm glad I stopped by, nonetheless.

Have a marvelous day! I look forward to reading your next one.

Mark

latearrival
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8 posted 2009-02-24 01:08 PM


Lovely.I am not a great lover of "love poems", but really enjoyed this touch. latearrival
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