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Monk Frost I! Member
since 2008-06-15
Posts 80 |
Our entire Ideal is evidently to question Why we never solve the solution |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
if you have a solution, wouldn't it be solved? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The answer to the question is "why". Interesting. Eric |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
Rotf @ SEA  I think the whole point is that these poems are meant to sound erudite but are actually complete nonsense!? Little traps for literary pomposity maybe. Yes I like that idea.  |
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turtle Senior Member
since 2009-01-23
Posts 548Harbor |
you see moonbeam....we DO agree. lol |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I think these little poems (?) would make great bumperstickers to alleviate road rage. We would be too busy contemplating the solutions that have not solved anything to be angry. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What bothers me Alison is that I understood that.............(smile)..... Eric |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Question: Why is Ideal capitalized? Is it the name of someone? Does it refer to God? You encourage constructive critiques so I know you are willing to discuss the construction of the poem. So I wondered... Thanks in advance! |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
ALISON!! Gawd, with these as bumper stickers you'd have London in maniacal uproar during the Monday morning rush hour. If you capitalize a word, Sharon, it makes it More Important! (or a typo - heh) |
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