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gilead
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since 2008-03-10
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nevada, USA

0 posted 2009-02-20 11:45 PM


I look at those movie stars—
so young, vibrant, beautiful,
then, on late night TV, so old,
wrinkled and gray . . .

Why isn’t it we grow up, say, to eighty,
but still look like twenty?
Why not shriveled up on the inside
when we die, but young, vibrant
and beautiful, on the outside?


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gilead
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since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
1 posted 2009-02-20 11:47 PM


Ah, I know we both have the answer, don’t we? But, just in case, what do you think?

art

Boshii2
Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146

2 posted 2009-02-21 12:22 PM


My children say.."you have scarred me for life" But it is the scars of life they love to show and compare.They spend hours remembering when....How dull their lives would have been with no scars. The same with the wrinkles.
I love mine.
Except the fat ones... well maybe the love handles are ok. love Boshii2

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2009-02-21 05:07 AM


Then we wouldn't have the deeply thought out reasons to teach others.
Scientists can't figure out why we do grow old because our bodies are made to replenish the cells over and over.

I think it's because I drank too much whiskey and dreamed I was smart.
Then I found out the difference and just shook my grey head is silence.

The drink just kept me from being me. Too late I had aged......(smile)..

Good pondering piece.

Eric

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2009-02-21 12:41 PM


I'd hate to look the way I did when I was 20.  The grey hair and near-wrinkles suggest that I am wise, mature, knowledgeable, at peace with the world, unstressed, and should be knitting in a rocking chair - ha ha! if only they knew!

Owl

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
5 posted 2009-02-21 02:01 PM


Art,

Do speak with your local funeral director.  They are experts at this.

I got a kick out of this.

Bobby

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2009-02-21 02:43 PM


gilead - I do know that I would have liked to know then what I know now. The things I could have done!

BC

gilead
Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
7 posted 2009-02-21 02:50 PM


Ha ha! Glad you good people and friends enjoyed this---it was written in fun!

art

gilead
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since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
8 posted 2009-02-21 10:33 PM


I didn't make it clear if the questions or the poet were stupid, or both---ha ha, but I leave that to you to decide!

Love ya---

art

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
9 posted 2009-02-22 10:37 PM



Art each stage in life has something beautiful going for it and always remember

that beauty is always in the eye of the beholder, and what one person thinks is

beautiful another person may not.
enjoyed your post.

Lindsay

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

10 posted 2009-02-22 11:15 PM


How about young, vibrant and beautiful on the INSIDE when we die.
I find that more appealing.

Maybe you have to be of a certain age . . .

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
11 posted 2009-02-23 11:08 AM


I'm with Eric

whiskey really takes a toll

great little write here!

Juju
Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
12 posted 2009-02-23 11:26 AM


No amount of plastic surgery can fix problems located inside the head.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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