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Wasting my time
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Wasting my time |
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adamjames72 New Member
since 2009-02-17
Posts 6 |
Needs a real title, suggestions? other than that, its just a rough draft. I quiver as this foriegn skin touches me I can tell already it is not to be Damn it for not being the skin of the one I no longer see I stare blankly into these new eyes The fact they inspire nothing, is no surprise Damn them for not belonging to the one who still makes my heart fly I kiss lips that feel like a strangers No rush goes through me, no sense of excitement or danger Damn it for not feeling like it did with the one who left my heart endangered I hear goodnight as if in a foriegn tongue I don't feel safe or comfortable, like a security net was sprung Damn it for not coming from the person I thought was the one I am asked by someone alien to me to be their boyfriend I feel sick all over, here it will have to end Because damn it, my love for another I still hope to mend |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I hope you get the "one" back.  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Adamjames72, Don't post rough drafts. At least don't admit to it. We're not here to write your poems, or think up titles. Bobby |
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