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Rick Mordecon Junior Member
since 2009-02-05
Posts 10NYC, N.Y. |
BROTHER Standing close to myself I feel awkward, unsure of my intentions The intangibles defer amongst themselves Cueing off each other Barely responding to brother Feeling lost around them I gaze at wind and sun Seeing their benign inventions How freely they come and go Brother goes on with his life Trying to communicate Ambitions clouding loyalties Dancing with shadows Sparring with sullen society Standing close to myself I miss the mirror image Scent provides sight Sight provides sound Listening to brother, listening to me |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Dancing with shadows Sparring with sullen society" Good lines, Rick. Perceptive write, offers the reader space for pondering. |
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Rick Mordecon Junior Member
since 2009-02-05
Posts 10NYC, N.Y. |
thanks midnitesun, I try to at least inspire poets to think outside the "I" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: We are all one, you say it beautifully. Love, Margherita |
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Rick Mordecon Junior Member
since 2009-02-05
Posts 10NYC, N.Y. |
thx margherita..much appreciated. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I like it Rick. Thought stimulating without getting too ridiculous. Sometimes we really don't know ourselves do we? I like improvisational jazz but I don't like it when it goes too far off track. Then it's only the players that get the meaning and joy. Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Standing close to myself I miss the mirror image Scent provides sight Sight provides sound Listening to brother, listening to me"   Linda . |
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