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Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2009-02-17 10:17 PM

Naught

I have nothing to say
This is life without love
The snow has no purpose
Everything Empty
Reflects upon my face

To wait and to begin new
My life will turn again
I can hope for the best
I will pray for the change

I want to be lucky
And find myself in love
So unexpectedly
That I'm caught unguarded

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-02-17 10:25 PM

Yo dear Juju,

Yes, that might work for you. The unexpected can be fun, or not. That's what makes it so much fun. It's something like shooting craps.

What you have to remember to do in craps, is grab the money and run.

Love Bobby

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2009-02-17 11:19 PM

Juju - it will happen when you least expect it, and more so when not looking. Wish you well...

BC

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2009-02-23 10:30 PM

not quite sure that love can be wed with luck...seems to me that love is associated more with lots of work than a little luck...your write is excellent...your take on the subject is thought-provoking...well done...

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2009-02-24 10:57 AM

Juju, thank you for sharing rich feelings with this well crafted poem, I really love the spirit of the poem, its deepness and lightness, this is beautiful.

yann

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2009-02-25 10:48 AM

quote:
So unexpectedly
That I'm caught unguarded

Yes, having no walls of defense built up, is a great premise for success, insofar we give love a chance when it happens to pass us by.

Beautiful thoughts.

Love,
Margherita

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2009-03-06 03:05 PM

This leaves a smile... I know that wish! *S*

zaxby
Junior Member

since 2009-03-05

Posts 48
California

7 posted 2009-03-06 03:14 PM

surprise, one of the many facets of love. you brought that home in this piece.I forgot how special that is.

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