Comp Love (please responde)

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Comp Love (please responde)

HellSpawn00
New Member

since 1999-09-14

Posts 2

0 posted 1999-09-14 10:02 AM

I lay awake in my bed,
Waitin' for that ole' puter to start screaming,tellin' me your there.

I feel all alone without that daily Email,
Not known if it might be the last.

And then I reply and get no answer for days and days,
Whats wrong? am I not typing in code or,
Is it I'm not loved by you anymore?

Please give me te hope you still love me,
Even tho I'm not the purest soul.

HellSpawn00

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He who dies with the most toys, Still dies.

Maitay
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA

1 posted 1999-09-14 08:36 PM

that was diffrent. it sort of sounded to me like you were trying to force the words. Great job though.....

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~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

HellSpawn00
New Member

since 1999-09-14

Posts 2

2 posted 1999-09-15 12:10 PM

Thanx,
That was my first poem, so sorry if it was different. But I'm glad you liked it.

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He who dies with the most toys, Still dies.

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