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HCwildchild
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since 1999-09-03
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0 posted 1999-09-03 08:37 PM




I've fallin in love so suddenly
Uncertain of how you feel for me
I'd give anything to be yours, I'd cross the sea to be with you
I say I love you so much, but do you feel the same way too?
My Dearest Love please give me a sign
Tell me I'm not wasting my time
There is such an ache in my heart
Oh why must we be so far apart?
I want to feel your arms around me
I want to have your love surround me
I'd shower you with Tender kisses
Shower you with devotion
I'd grant all of your fondest wishes
With a love that is deeper than the ocean
So tell me that you love me true before it is too late
I hate to push you darling, but my love can't wait



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Heather C.

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Alwye
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In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-09-05 02:10 AM


Heartfelt work, nicely done!

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller


HCwildchild
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since 1999-09-03
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2 posted 1999-09-05 04:05 AM


thanx

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Heather C.

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