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Black Rain
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since 1999-07-19
Posts 60
California, USA

0 posted 1999-08-19 02:23 AM


I thought I was over you,
I guess I thought wrong.
Everything was going good,
Better than I thought it would.
Then you had to come along with your sweet smile,
I never realized how much I missed your style.
You asked me how I was doing and gave me a big hug,
I stood there surprised and answered with a shrug.
Life was easier when you said you didn't care,
Now I'm a wreck, life isn't fair.
You've hurt me so many times before,
and the sad thing is I'll let you do it more.

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"I'm just a girl...standing in front of a boy...asking him to love her." - Notting Hill

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DreamEvil
Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-08-19 05:21 AM


Very true.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©



NaTaLy
Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 43
brooklyn,ny,usa
2 posted 1999-08-19 11:53 AM


its hard getting out of a bad relationship.
i used to be in an unfair relationship like that and i always came back for more till i smarted up.its hard but you can do it~

mister61
Junior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 41
bergen county, nj
3 posted 1999-08-19 03:22 PM


Very well done - not much consolation for the pain, I know, but your talent might help you deal with it.
Nici
Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 22
Hastings, New Zealand
4 posted 1999-08-21 08:35 AM


I know what you mean.
I'm in a situation like that at the moment.
No matter how much we seem to get hurt we always let it happen again - its habit.
What can I say...we learn from our mistakes and move on EVENTUALLY!!!

Good poem!

pen of passion
Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234

5 posted 1999-08-26 10:38 AM


Black Rain, I don't know how old you are but in time you will find out that the truth of love is this: after finding the inner strength to let a bad relationship go, it is easier to find a good loving relationship. One must develop an emotional fortitude to take it or leave it.

The Mike Sacks
Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129
brooklyn ny
6 posted 1999-08-29 09:46 AM


WoW,i know the way u feel
Maitay
Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA
7 posted 1999-09-01 11:46 AM


I am just getting out a a situation like that. I know that it will hurt, but it will hurt more to keep holding on. I wish you the best of luck for everyone going through this. It's great that you recognize whats going on. Keep up the good writing....

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~depression is not a sickness of the body or mind, but of the heart. When the heart feels alone and afraid~
Maitay Mirabel Litton


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