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NaTaLy
Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 43
brooklyn,ny,usa

0 posted 1999-08-18 04:00 PM


i have all these ideas in my head but when i put them down on paper they come out all wrong.

i have all these dreams and fantasies in my head of love,lust and beauty.

but when it comes out it looks like jeleosy hate and ugliness.

my writing is nothing like what it seems in my head.

if you could only see.

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n.m.

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