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chollagrl4
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since 1999-08-10
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0 posted 1999-08-11 10:50 PM


I thought I'd never do it, cause I didnt wanna be like my dad, but when all my friends said try it, I thought it might not be that bad. I thought nothing would happen, since it was my first time I had that doubt, but when the needle pierced my skin I saw blood and blacked out. They took me to the hospital, and pumped my chest to see it rise, and the next thing I remember I was opening my eyes. Everything was blurry, so all I could do was stare, but when I really focused I saw my mother standing there. She smiled at me, and said something I didnt hear, then on her face, I saw a little tear. "I'm sorry mom", I said very slow, and at that moment I knew it was my time to go. I felt myself being taken away, but when I saw my moms face I knew I wanted to stay. I slipped into death, and now I'm gone forever. I wish I could tell my mom goodbye, but I know I will never. So if you wanna be like me, try heroin once and die, and remember, like me, you'll never get to say goodbye.
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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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1 posted 1999-08-12 10:54 AM


Very intense and what a powerful message! Hope everyone reads this and remembers the value in it! How sad, but this could happen for real!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


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