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Jimmy
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since 1999-07-17
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Oak Grove

0 posted 1999-08-08 12:04 PM


As I look at you, your angelic face,
to say I don't want you, would be a disgrace.
I want you to be with me, to have you near,
I don't ever want you to leave, it's something I just fear.
I want you to be next to me, wherever it is I am,
without you, I don't feel complete, as a man.
I want you to be close, no matter what the cause,
I want it to be perfect, without any flaws.
I don't understand why you could even think I don't want you around,
when your gone, I am lost, unable to be found.
I always want you near me, all night and day,
I know I can't have that, but I must pray.
I don't really know what you are felling in this moment in time,
as far as me, I want you to be mine.
You can't always trust what you hear,
there is always somebody who don't want us near.
Thank you for coming to me, instead of a different way,
I will remember things like this, happening from day to day.

© Copyright 1999 Jimmy VanNatta - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
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In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-08-09 01:39 AM


I can relate to the concept of this piece a lot...great work, Jimmy!

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy

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