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Black Rain Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 60California, USA |
Where did all the beauty go, that you said was in me. Where did all your love go to, and why is this not easy? When did our friendship die, when did you stop believing. Tell me what happened to "us", and tell me why you're leaving. I can't believe you're gone, we're at the very end. I wish I could start over, and be with you once again. I want to hear three little words that give away your heart. If only I hadn't messed this up, I could have heard them from the start. I miss you more within the start of each new day. Someday you'll come back to me, that is what I pray. My days are dark without you, for you were my sunshine. My eyes are weak without you, for without you I am blind. I wish I had told you how I felt and hadn't been so shy. So now instead of holding you I have to say goodbye. ------------------ "I'm just a girl...standing in front of a boy...asking him to love her." - Notting Hill [This message has been edited by Black Rain (edited 08-03-99).] |
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Tanya Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43Brooklyn, NY, USA |
Aww That was so sweet. I truly thing it was really beautiful it really touched me. Keep writing great poems like this, you're really good at it. <333Tanya<333 |
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Black Rain Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 60California, USA |
Thanks ------------------ "I'm just a girl...standing in front of a boy...asking him to love her." - Notting Hill |
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Black Rain Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 60California, USA |
Sorry, I wanted to try this animation out.....   ------------------ "I'm just a girl...standing in front of a boy...asking him to love her." - Notting Hill |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
Your a very powerful poet! Keep on posten 'em! ------------------ ©Misty |
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Slim Shady Junior Member
since 1999-08-03
Posts 32Phoenix, AZ, USA |
This is a very good poem! Be sure to post more on these boards, I look forward to reading more from you in the future. ------------------ The Slim Shady |
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swan Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 58california, usa |
preach it ------------------ "You can't make a heart love somebody, you can tell it what to do but it won't listen at all. You can't make a heart love someboy, you can lead a heart to love, but you can't make it fall.--Clint Black |
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Black Rain Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 60California, USA |
thanks for your coments everyone, they are appreciated.........oh and swan: right on sister! ------------------ "I'm just a girl...standing in front of a boy...asking him to love her." - Notting Hill |
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MysticWizard Junior Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 14 |
Thanx for sharing that poem. I liked it. I think you are a great poet. I look forward to seeing mor of you poems on the forum. ------------------ Brad B. [email]nuttyguy@hotcity.com[/email] [url]http://ballistic.dynip.com/~bradman[/url] [This message has been edited by MysticWizard (edited 08-05-99).] |
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Psycodillica Junior Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 28Lapeer,Mi,USA |
"Some of gods greatest gifts are unanwsered Prayers"-Garth Brooks" Psycodillica --------------- "Don't cry because it's over,but smile because it happened" |
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