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Kiya Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 31Kingston Springs,Tn.,U.S. |
As the key falls deeper into the well I hear it hit the water The door it holds is locked away hidden behind dreams and mysteries Dreams that were once the sparkle of my eyes Eyes that belong to a distant star that shines in the never-ending sky The answers all have questions within themselves The fire of eternalness has disappeared and beyond the door lies a love with only flames at fates feet To give all there is to give would not bring the two together only paitence and time will tell if the door will ever open to reveal the treasures that await within ------------------ Kiya Bowermaster [This message has been edited by Kiya (edited 07-29-99).] |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wonderful poem Kiya. I received your E-mail, and found this, as you asked. As for naming it, use something you like, something that fits well. The one thing that camed to mind with me is simply "Locked". Perhaps some others can give some other suggestions for you. A wonderful job!!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I agree with Alwye. Something simple would be best. Might I suggest, "Fate"? ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
Sounds like you got a couple of good suggestions for a title, Kiya (and for a darn good poem, too). But there's one more thing you need - a valid email address! I think you had a typo when you registered, and every time someone replies to your posts I get the notification instead of you. Please check your "Profile" and fix the email address. Thanks! |
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nicnac8 Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 46New York, N.Y. USA |
That was a beautiful poem. Keep up the good work! |
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