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nicnac8
Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 46
New York, N.Y. USA

0 posted 1999-07-28 04:12 AM


Young, I am;
young indeed.
You are the one, the one i need.

Young, I am;
young for sure.
Who'd have thought that he only wanted to score.

Young, I am;
young indeed.
When he left,
my heart did bleed.

Young, I am;
young for sure.
You shall see my love no more.

Young, young we are;
you once were my shining star.

Too late now,
I refuse to wear this frown.

Love,
my sweet,sweet love
my love is gone.

Here I am,
I'm moving on.

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Princess Lily
Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149
USA
1 posted 1999-07-29 01:05 AM


Absolutely Perfect!!Describes young love perfectly.I love it.Being a teen is not easy.Especailly a teen that's in love(This from a girl who always gets her heart broken)But always stays happy~Lily

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

*A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive*


nicnac8
Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 46
New York, N.Y. USA
2 posted 1999-07-31 03:54 AM


thanx 4 the reply Princess im glad u liked it
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