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Ashley2405 Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 28West Columbia, South Carolina 29170 |
How can I explain How much I want to be with you? There's a twisting pain That I feel if I don't see you soon. I think I'm in love But someone else loves you, too I don't know what I should do-- Hide it from her and not be true? How can I stab her in the back I know how much she loves you But every time we're together I begin to think I love you. Why is life so hard for me? So love is blind, but how can't she see How much I want you To be with me? I can't do this to my girl Friends are said to be more Important than love And I used to agree, before. Now I know the feeling is mutual And I don't think I can decide-- Stab my girl in the back Or ignore the love between you and I? ------------------ *})i({*Ash*})i({* |
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jjsweets Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 18albion,MI,usa |
that is dope! (real good) ------------------ * s.w.e.e.t.s * |
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LucidLore New Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 4Southern CA |
Ashley... You have a great amount of talent, I have read all of your works on these pages... you have a great ability to express your feelings.. I relate to a lot of your work... Great Job ------------------ === Lucid Lore "For Every Love Letter That Is Written, There Is Another One Burnt" |
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Black Rain Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 60California, USA |
I can totally relate to this poem, as to many of your others. Its very good, and I can't wait to hear some more. ------------------ "Each of us are angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other." - Luciano de Crescenzo |
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