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Ashlie693
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since 1999-07-08
Posts 25


0 posted 1999-07-18 06:09 PM


Sure he can come over,
He'll sneak through my window, I said
No one will even notice
I wish I had used my head

Did I get caught? No..
But I did pay a big fee
It wasnt the ten I payed for the beer
But..it was my virginity.

Its not as bad if your in love
But I didnt know the guy
That was something for my husband
Now I feel like I am going to die

I didnt think I was too drunk
I thought my friends would help me
But I did drink too much and they werent my real friends,
And now pregnant I may be.

Theres only a small chance,
But the fear in my heart is great
He told me I wanted it,
My friends said I said NO, they call it rape

I cant have a baby
For I am still one
But for now, I must act like an adult
Even though, I am so young


© Copyright 1999 Ashlie693 - All Rights Reserved
MysticWizard
Junior Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 14

1 posted 1999-07-18 06:35 PM


GREAT poem. Sad. But great. I like it a lot. It tells the truth of teensd having sex too early. And that a lot of guys are horny dirtballs. I shouldnt be saying that cuz I am a guy, but I know the truth. And that is that a lot of teen males or hornier than hell and just wanna get some. So anyways ashlie693, like your poem. keep it up.
anonyogi
Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 174
United States
2 posted 1999-07-18 07:26 PM


Teenage years are funny. You must act like an adult without adult priviledges, or adult emotions and experience in order to survive.

I think your poem brings that home.

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