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Darm31
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since 1999-07-08
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westminster ca usa

0 posted 1999-07-09 12:59 PM



Was there more??
Or am I less??
Did I even mean anything at all?
This is a mess!
Sometimes I wonder..at night I stay awake
I have no Idea what is happening, For goodness sake...
Why can't you tell me?? Why is this hard??
Did u think I was stupid??
You should have known I was smart...I knew you were leaving...I even knew why

But theres only one question that will still remain...
Could there be more??

Help me ease the pain.

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Ashlie693
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since 1999-07-08
Posts 25

1 posted 1999-07-10 08:46 PM


Wow Darm. That was a really good and undersatndable poem for me. I can totally relate, for that it EXACTLY what i want to say to my boyfriend right now! Very good job!

-Ashlie

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