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Teen Poetry #1
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splifstar
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 10
ma.
0 posted 1999-07-07 10:46 AM

Two friends since day one.
Always together always having fun.
Even when the worst came,
the two remaind as one.

Who knew that the day would come,
when you would have a bounty on
your head. we were best of friends
but now I make you end.
© Copyright 1999 splifstar - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
1 posted 1999-07-07 08:54 PM

This one is pretty good - but can you change the second stanza a bit?
roxy8365
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 27
e.falmouth MA usa
2 posted 1999-07-08 08:54 AM

hey, i like your poem!!!it reminds me of something i had!!good job!!!

p.s.is this fendy?
roxy8365
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 27
e.falmouth MA usa
3 posted 1999-07-08 09:15 AM

good job!!! love, roxy
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