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Blue Eyed Wanderer Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84Rhode Island, US |
You went against the odds. You were so bold and strong. They said that you had hours left. You tried to prove them wrong. You didn't go without a fight I saw that in your eyes. In this game we all call life I'd say you won first prize. By your bed I knelt And held your shaking hand. I whispered, "If you can't keep fighting, Trust me, I'll understand." At that you looked up to me And put your hand upon my face. Then you closed your eyes and journeyed Towards the other place. As you closed your eyes I said That I'd miss you very much. You told me more than words could say By the love in that last touch. ------------------ Anytime you try to win everything, you must be willing to lose everything. -Larry Csonka *~Jessica~* |
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*~*butterfly*~* Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 28minnesota |
oh my, that was an excellent poem!!!!! its sad, but it is good! you have a lot of talent keep it up!  sorry for your loss. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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