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Lauren
Junior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 21
FORT PIERCE ,FL

0 posted 1999-09-26 04:20 PM


You walk in the house your finally here....its been a week but it feels like a year...
Hold me now and hold me tight...even if just for me pretend you love me with all your might..
A day without you is an eternity of lonliness...but just one time to feel your kiss would fill my world with happiness...
Give me the privilege of having you once...even though it will never be enough...just one day thats all ill ask ...please at least grant me that...

You walk in the house your finally here....its been a week but it feels like a year...and my body fills up with fear...i wish i had the guts to tell you how i feel my dear...

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Star Fairy 2
Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
1 posted 1999-09-26 04:28 PM


this is really good.. keep up the good work.

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"If to rectify your demeanor,
You must imitate another,
Your philosiphy on morality
Is a burden on your mentality,
Your actions based on popularity,
Will never fulfill you internally,
Cuz the world was not blessed with equality,
But rather with fake geniality.
--823--

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-11-13 07:31 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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