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Teen Poetry #1

Searching for you(Where do you go?)

StratMatt
Member

since 1999-09-19

Posts 87
Macomb, IL, U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-09-19 05:56 PM

This is actually a song I wrote, but I wanted to share the lyrics here.

Where do you go? Where do you run?
When everything stops being fun
You said that you'd call, my phone hasn't rung.
You've crushed all we were before we had begun

Where do you go? Where do you hide?
Why do you lock everything inside?
I long for your touch, but I can't find your hand.
I've searched every single piece of this land.

I just don't know where to search now.
I just don't know where I can find you.
I just don't know where to run to.
To find your love.

Where did you go? Where can I find?
Your hair, your lips, your face, your mind.
Why did you go? Why did you hide?
Why can't you be here by my side?

Did I move too fast? For you I'd go slow.
I'll give you time, I'll give you more
than I have to give, without a doubt.
All I need is for you to come out.

I just don't know what to do now.
I just don't know how I can live.
Without you in my arms now.
Giving you love.

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-09-20 12:37 PM

That was really good...i hate it when im at a loss for words, but i liked it

Aquarius
New Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 6
Norton,Ma. USA

2 posted 1999-09-20 01:06 PM

This IS great!!! Your emotions and thoughts were displayed nicely. I could connect with what you were feeling when you wrote this. I wrote TONS of these poems. Losing a love interest DOES hurt and cause a feeling of emptiness. I'm sorry you hurt, but what wonderful writing comes out of situations like these. Keep up the good work and keep smilin'! You deserve that!

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To handle yourself, use your head;
To handle others, use your heart.

StratMatt
Member

since 1999-09-19

Posts 87
Macomb, IL, U.S.A.

3 posted 1999-09-20 04:11 PM

Thanks people. Not for the compliments, but for the comments. These are the first few I've gotten, for the most part.

Well, actually, thanks for the compliments too

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