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Midnitesun
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Gaia

0 posted 2003-02-23 04:36 PM


Tattered, shattered
heart torn apart...
not for me,
but for you
I do
cry this song
and sing along
to the blues,
for you did lose
your heart and soul,
then found yourself
standing alone
in a blizzard
of lies.

This is just a heartsong for a friend, who has lost a 'true' love, by deceit.
No names or locations to be divulged.


© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
sweetwater
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since 2002-12-16
Posts 178
Perth
1 posted 2003-03-03 01:42 PM


I can't see how your friend will stay sad for long with friends like you supporting them... what a sweet gesture.
Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2003-03-03 01:49 PM


big heart and lots of kindness...
must be a reflection of the author..


wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
3 posted 2003-03-05 04:47 PM


I can only echo the thoughts above.

You are a healer.
Peace.

Ed

rkcraig
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since 2003-02-27
Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA
4 posted 2003-03-10 01:14 AM


midnite -

your friend is truly priveleged to have someone like you by her side.  If everyone in this world had a friend as sympathetic as you, it would truly be an admirable world.

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