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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 2000-08-08 01:01 AM


The cries echoe my screams
Can't you hear them seeping out
That were once so closed within me.

I can see the whole world echoes with my tears.
That endlessly keep flowing into the bottomless pit.

Echoes of my tears,
Would you dare come near
if you could see the darker side of my soul?

Screams transcend where only I seem to just pretend
and close them away forever
but yet the tears cannot hide they glide along my cheeks until they hit the floor
Yet still the screams stay locked for you see
I through away the key long ago.

Can you feel the echoes of my tears?
So tragically they seal my fate.


[This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (edited 08-08-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-08-08 03:36 AM


Hi Rosebud,

Do you need a shoulder to lean on? I'm only an icq or email away. Hope all is well with you.

Rosebud1229
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2 posted 2000-08-08 11:53 AM


thank you so much your quite unique I'm fine but I will seek you out if I need you thanks I don't know about you but I do have many different facets in my life and sometimes I guess this is just my faucet overflowing..
X Angel
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3 posted 2000-08-08 11:56 AM


Rose, I wonder if you would want this posted in a poetry forum, so people could enjoy it? I think Dark would be a great spot to share this at. Let me know, I can move it in a heartbeat!
Very true emotions you've written here, I am sure we have all felt them at one time or another.
~Heather

Rosebud1229
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4 posted 2000-08-08 12:29 PM


Yes I agree with you thank you go ahead thx for that. beam me up scottie lol
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