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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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okay, so i'm notoriously hard on my writing, but out of all the poems i've written, i can only think of maybe 10 that actually work. sure, alot of them were experiments with different styles, and some of them were simply emotional purges..but daaaaamn. why didn't anybody tell me how bad i was? i beg anyone who's curious(i dunno why you would be), if you ever must view my archives, limit it to open#30 and up, when i had some sense of what i was doing....arghhhhhh |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Are you questioning our judgement?  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
with regards to my stuff, judgement aaand sanity. pblllllt #30 and up! hockey's on..i'm off  you |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
He's questioning our judgement.  pblllllt yerself.  (ooh. Sounds like fun. brb.) |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
You SUCK! I do not happen to believe that, but any time you are feeling especially self deprecating please feel free to read this...if it helps. ALL poetry has flaws. It is a human thing. Get over it and write some more of your special take on life. Please. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I'll swing in right behind icebox here.... I remember telling you once that some poets are dancers, and some are boxers. There's grace and beauty in each, poise and balance in each, directed strength in each. You're a boxer, and a damned good one....I'm a dancer. Sometimes I find that very limiting, and I come to you for lessons in how to do that other thing. I sincerely hope you keep giving them. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like Serenity's reply, Icebox's comments... and Ratleader's wisdom. Me? Heck, Raph, I'm always questioning my judgment - self-imposed, that is. But I never question your art. So there.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
the archives are evil . . . and if you didn't think that even one thing you wrote was not perfect, well then, where would be room for constant learning? I read the crap I posted, it was crap too and My God, I was flitting about . . . you guys amusing me - maybe waiting until one day I made sense. *laughing here* and yeah, you do suck Raph, so bad that everyone reads your writing, My God, isnt there someone over there that can smack ya a good one for me? See? When I feel like that, I simply smack myself . . . *grin* As a matter of fact, ALL the greats thought they sucked. So there. I like what Kari said about art. So very true. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
i didn't say it aaaaall sucked. just a solid chunk of it.  thanks for the support, as always, i wasn't fishing for any i was just venting. i am, however, pleased by the people who've responded here. all happen to be fantastic writers and more importantly people i admire even the chick from buffalo with the spanking fixation.. :p |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
you are so dead, you Canuck. (that made me laugh and so what? There is nothing wrong with fixations.) plbbbbbbbbbbt! http://www.skypoint.com/members/schutz19/ccanuck.htm |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
he was a tool, guardian was much cooler http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Guardian_%28Marvel_Comics%29 |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Raph, you silly canuck! I love your writing, and you know, I know everything. :P |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
thats X-Men and Marvel, doesnt count . . . he probably stole his idea from a poor innocent American, probably even a New Yorker!  Yeah, baybayyyy . . . http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Captain_America |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
I wish we could self-delete here. I'd barely have even an archival presence were it so. Believe me, I understand the original post, I'd venture that I'd probably run from all but a handful of my attempts at literacy. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 I love your writings..... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Raph! You're Canadian? Well I'll be a monkey's ... aunt.  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Chris ye didnae know? I'm a Toronto boy who hates the Leafs and loves the Habs |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 ok, so are you fishing for (1) complements? (2) more pbllltt fun? (3) startin a who-sucks-worst-or-best contest? and surely you know I have a bigger suckier archival doo deposit than you sweetie  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I would guess all of the above and uh, you guys . . c'mon . . my stuff just started to make sense . . . don't even go there. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
well, none of mine are good enough to ARCHIVE and very little of it makes sense cuz the world doesn't make sense, and therefore I am very readable...and usually right, right, even though I am generally left of the world's fulcrum balance point ???huh???  never mind I am going to hang out in the corner and holler NEENER NEENER in a cool chorus line |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ahem your presence is requested in the alley please read Jaime's post huggs to you and its ok to read mine if you want a laugh lol AND? don't anyone let Richard Wells delete and damn thing! lol |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I would think everyone who writes at all has some regrets and some successes. That is life in itself. Yes DO Not let R Wells delete anything. Let it all stay. And please R. Wells, we miss You. do post soon. |
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